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the graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The line graph provides data on changing of the temperature in one year for three
different cities while table gives information about average of sunshine hours
same countries.   <o:p></o:p>

Overall,
it can be seen that changing pattern of temperature of New York and London is
very similar unlike Sydney. <o:p></o:p>

Looking
at the line graph in more detail, it is clear that temperature of Sydney
started at 25°C and finished at the same point. In addition, Sydney temperature
is reached at 15°C in July, while average temperature stood at 30°C, which is
the highest point on the line graph for New York compared to 23°C for London. Then,
average temperature of London and Sydney is slightly decreased and they are reached
same point at in November and April month. Furthermore, average temperature in January
month stood at 3°C, which is the lowest point on the graph for New York compared
to at 7°C for London. <o:p></o:p>

Turning
to the table, it is evident that annual sunshine time of Sydney is higher than
for London and New York, at 2.473 hour, 1.180 hour and 2.535 hour respectively.
<o:p></o:p>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 965.302439024 208% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 9.54761904762 4.92477711251 194% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 14.4354604016 2.65546596893 544% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 283.868780488 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.45097560976 159% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 144.718638658 43.030603864 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.625 112.824112599 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781373483134 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707270394689 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576448761397 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593435123047 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066918597498 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.7 13.2329268293 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.13 61.2550243902 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 10.3012195122 211% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.41 11.4140731707 337% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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