The graph below conpares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.
Given is a lin graph illustrating the birth percentages of the US and China over the period of 80 years since 1920.
In general, it is evident that both the borth oercentages of the US and China decreased. Besides, the rate of the US was generally higher than that of China.
Concerning the USA, from 1920 to 1940, the rate fluctuated between 11 and 13%. In the next 5 years, it drooped steeply and hit the bottom of 5% before rising to 15% until 1950. The figure for this country saw a steady decline for the rest of the period.
Regarding China, in the first 15 years of the period, the data fluctuated and grew to 15%, followed by a fall to 5% in 1940. In the next 5 years, the number remained the same before going up dramatically and reaching the peak of 20% in 1995. Until 2000, there was a sharp decline in the proportion and it fell slowly to under 5%
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, regarding, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31097560976 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3770401238 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8253834417 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211238472622 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783024795867 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827442416238 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119330275799 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050268999331 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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