The graph below depict the figures relating to hours worked and stress levels among professional in eight groups.

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The graph below depict the figures relating to hours worked and stress levels among professional in eight groups.

The charts give information about hours consumed and the percentage of stress related to illness among different groups of workers. The most obvious pieces of information are that businessmen has the maximum amount of time consumed in comparison with other groups. Moreover, while lecturers have the lowest level of time consumption compared to other professions given, they show their superiority over other groups in the proportion of people suffered from stress related to illness.

Regarding time taken, businessmen –the largest amount in this category–, movie producers, and doctors account for above around 50. Then, there are a smaller amount for writers, programmers, lawyers, and chefs, which are while the two former are recorded at 40s, the two latter are listed at 30s. The exception is lecturers standing at roughly 25 –the minimum hours taken.

However, lecturers (25%) have the greatest proportion suffering from stress related to illness. This is followed by movie producers, doctors, businessmen, and chefs recording at 18%, 15%, 11%, and 10% each. Beside, there are a similar percentage for lawyers and writers which are noted at 8% and programmer (5%) has a smaller proportion than other employees in the same categories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professions'' or 'profession's'?
Suggestion: professions'; profession's
...l of time consumption compared to other professions given, they show their superiority over...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y–, movie producers, and doctors account for above around 50. Then, there are a s...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ve around 50. Then, there are a smaller amount for writers, programmers, lawyers, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44845360825 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73808397182 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8357142163 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.444444444 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112144189449 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494054070106 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568465040482 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735737427325 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608762419698 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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