The diagram illustrates how many billions KWH of electricity were produced and were consumed by the top ten countries during the year of 2014.
Overall, the most obvious pieces of information are that China showed its superiority over other countries which produced and used electricity at that year. In addition, the ten countries had a larger number in the production of electricity than the consumption of that, except Germany.
Moving to more detailed analysis in electricity production, in 2014, China had a higher figure that was accounted for 5,398 –the largest number of this sector. The second top rank was United States, which was listed at 4,099. These were followed by Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, which were ranged from around 1,000s to 500s. Then, the exception was Korea Rep, standing at fewer than 500 –the smallest number of this year.
Subsequently, it is clearly seen that the number of electricity consumed had a similar pattern to that of electricity generated relatively. There was the higher level of electricity used in China (5,322) and United States (3,866). The next rank were Russia, Japan, India, and Germany that was while the two former were recorded at 1,038 and 856,7 respectively, the two latter were noted at 698,8 and 582,5 successively. Lastly, four other countries had a smaller number, standing at around 400s.
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, second, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2197309417 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64278926444 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569506726457 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0081518829 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200248738318 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821928029848 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795596537766 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147793154533 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797993338132 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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