The given graph provides datas about how much energy resources have been consumed by the American since 1980 with some prediction until 2030.
Overall, it is easy to see that there has been an upward trend saw in all of the figures, with that of petrol and oil , coal and natural gas having the greatest climb .Meanwhile, that of alternative energy increased in a slow way .
Regarding petrol and oil, 35 quadrillions units were used in 1905. Although this number had a small fluctuation between 1980 and 1955, the consumption of petrol and oil is projected to grow fast in 2030 and it will still take the leading position.
Starting from 15 and 20 quadrillions units in 1980 respectively, the coal and natural gas used is predicted to rise in the next 50 years. in 2030, the consumption of coal is measured to go up by 30 quadrillions units , whereas that of natural gas will experience a slight growth to one-fourth quadrillions units.
the least exploited kinds of energy was nuclear, solar and hydropower. At the beginning of the period, only about 5 quadrillions units of them were used. However, an rise is predicted in the use of these 3 energy resources , but these datas will still be less than 10 quadrillions units.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78873239437 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75767853961 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2961651452 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14181253467 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060555371614 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489710046221 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827529597178 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507868327442 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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