The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the rate changes between birth and death in New Zealand since 1901 until 2101. The rate of births and deaths is ranged in thousands. Overall, since the year 1901 until our present time we can see that new born exceed the number of dead people.
To begin with, birth measures 20,000 in the year 1901 and increases gradually till it reaches a peak of approximately 66,000 in the year around 1969. Moreover, Birth rate faced a lot of ups and downs until now.
In contrast, Death range was always low and never exceeded more than 30,000 in the timeline between 1901 and 2020. As a start the Death number varied under 10,000 (year 1901) with a sudden increase to around 16,000 in only 1 year (1920). Then, its line on the graph reduced directly the year after by 3,000 but afterward the rate of Death rose slowly up to our recent days.
In conclusion, this graph shows the future of rates between Birth and Death where the two will meet at an intersection point 20 years from now. As the chart also predicts that Death will defeat Birth in the future and somehow this futuristic issue is scary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5396039604 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13932995895 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608910891089 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1478025733 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234058066439 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115577303471 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108801679471 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150709762222 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851609963245 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.