The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian counties living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total citizens living in four Asian nations between 1970 and 2020, as well as projections for the future years 2030 and 2040.
Overall, the populations in all the four countries will grow in the future. It is also noticeable that Malaysia will be the nation with the largest population, and Thailand the lowest in future times.
From 1970 to 2020, there were increases in the number of urban dwellers in all the Asian countries. Starting at the top level at over 30%, the Philippines rose to almost 50% in 1990 and dropped slightly by 10% in 2010, then increased minimally by 5% in the final year. Malaysia was the country which came second, at accurately 30% and grew by nearly 10% each year, hitting the highest figure (about 75%) in 2020. Indonesia had the same upward pattern as Malaysia, standing in the second position in 2020 despite the lowest point in the beginning. Thailand began with under 20% and increased to nearly 30% in 1990 and fluctuated around this figure until 2020.
In the future, all the four countries will witness a stable growth. Malaysia will still hold the top position, at over 80% in 2024. Indonesia will have a similar development, with nearly 60% in the final year, being in the second rank. The Philippines (in the third place) and Thailand (at the bottom level) will also rise by 10% and 15% respectively during 20 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and 15% respectively during 20 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, still, then, third, well, as well as, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75203252033 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44395504328 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.675524601 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132219022175 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521017553251 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614462615383 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972280148981 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746563991343 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.