The chart shows the rate of people living in Australia who were born in distinct countries from 1976 to 2011.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of Asians and people from other countries going to Australia tended to rise over the period, while there was an opposite trend which could be seen in people from the UK. Besides, the total population saw a slight drop in the first 25 years but later rose significantly during the final 10 years.
In 1976, around 14% of the Australian people were born in the UK, followed by other and Asia, at about 11% and 3% respectively. Over the next 25 years, while there was a dramatic decrease by approximately 7% in Australians who came from the UK, the figures for Other and Asia increased sharply to 12% and 8% in turn. The total demographic of Australia witnessed a gradual decrease from about 22% in 1976 to its all-time low of 21% in 2001.
Over the last 10 years, the percentage of people who came from the UK continued to fall to 5%, the lowest proportion among Asia and Other. By contrast, the figure for Asians went up dramatically and surpassed Other to become the nation having the most people living in Australia, at 15% in 2011. The total population of Australia saw a steep growth and reaching a peak at 25%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55458515284 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53806099016 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545851528384 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6241976248 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332727721941 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143892485575 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937743795256 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217731509602 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525695384225 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.