The flow chart introduces the data for price of bananas for each kilogramals in Japan, France, German and USA for a decade. The x-axis of the graph gives the time periode and the y-axis provides the informations of price for bananas per kg. In this essay I will try to give an short explaination of the chart given.
As we can see that in the beginning people from each countries can buy their fruit from 80 cents to 1.80 US dollar. Which increases several times in ten years until 2004. Moreover it is clear that in Japan bananas have great demand as a result the price for the fruit gets up for so many times and also decreased several times but in comparion to other countries costs for bananas are really high in Japan rather then other three countries. For United States of America, citizens can enjoy their fevorite fruit at a cheaper rate rather then other country citizens and costs for bananas are quite reasonable and constant for all the time. Other two Europian countries are unable to keep the price stable like USA and their price got up and down.
- The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and 78
- Some employers believe that job applicants social skills are more important than their academic qualifications Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples from your experience and knowledge Write a 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...er kg. In this essay I will try to give an short explaination of the chart given. ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ort explaination of the chart given. As we can see that in the beginning people...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... fruit from 80 cents to 1.80 US dollar. Which increases several times in ten years un...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... several times in ten years until 2004. Moreover it is clear that in Japan bananas have ...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...bananas are really high in Japan rather then other three countries. For United State...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...fevorite fruit at a cheaper rate rather then other country citizens and costs for ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, really, so, then, as for, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.546875 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22189599928 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8207865966 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173678982882 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786912225232 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588823227719 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149349489034 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407732573702 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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