It is true that all humans might have the social skills which can lead any individual to achive his aim or also can help them to live an energetic life. Yet it is not ovious that academic qualifications are less significant then social skills. In this essay I will share my opinion and experiences and I will explain why I do not support the claim of some employees.
When the purpose is to get a job it is important to have some educational qualification which can help each individual to operate their work if they have the relevant certificate accordings to job requirements. For example, of someone have degree on Hotel management he can easily apply for job in hotel industry because of his qualification which gives him an extra benefit nevertheless if he does not have any relevant certificates it is quite difficult to find a job.
Moreover, academic qualification which refers to education and people learn how to be a social beign throughout education. Addiionally, this teach us morality, manners and other virtues which are extremly important in job sectors. No one can be so social only by social skills only but also needs be educated. A clear example for better understending is that each and every industries whom offer jod to general people, they ask for some specific skills and loyal applicants, here loyal means good manner, truthful, punctual, pasionate etc which are unable to practice without education.
I would like to end my discussion by saying that social skills are not at all as much as important than academic qualifications. Both are important in our general life and also to find a job but putting all credits to one point only is not an wise decision. We should educate ourselves along with social skills and virtues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85793048668 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4626165584 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241056829288 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871516043354 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269766098883 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141129232434 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00694535474029 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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