Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that having these people to give a talk to school students is the best way to tell them about dangers of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a believe that to speech behind the truth those who experience a sentence by the violent activity and how that change them to become a gentleman would be a best person to speak to the students be away from criminal mind. However, I strongly agree to the statement because, experience make a men perfect to talk about the reality and the capacity to change the world.
Speak about a matter which spokesman can feel would be a better theme to elaborate to others. In other words, talking the actuality by the help of examples and instant situation make listeners to seen in their mind what speaker is explaining. Furthermore, students have the inquisitive nature to experience everything which is neither good nor bad. To instruct them about the detrimental effect of criminality which is illustrating in violent movies or stories and even in politics by the reliever from the jail can elaborate to the students in better way. For instance, a famous student counsellor and public speaker in US is an imprison in many years because of the offense in his teenage.
Many others argue that imprisoner would give a false signals to the student listeners by the belief that any criminals can become a public talker which they did an offense or cruality to others is not a matter in the sense. Nevertheless, which they can vanish from the audience mind by the good thing which they did to the society after the imprisonment. For example, they can open up to the society that everyone can change the cruel mind to the peaceful action and thinking which is good to the community makes to remove the underlined reliance in others.
In conclusion, a better speaker who is experienced a real crisis of violence would be a better person to instruct the students to behave manually and move away from violence although they are a criminal in their past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77258566978 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64780648171 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3619786833 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109918450367 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460242837834 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274954689991 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681147368958 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304566121361 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.