The graph below show the average monthly temperature in three major cities.
The line chart compares the monthly temperatures in 3 African cities namely Mombasa, Kenya; Cario, Egypt; and Cape Town, South Africa. Each unit is measured in dgree of fahrenheit.
As can be seen from the graph, there is a general fluctuation in all 3 cities. Especially, the most striking feature is that Mombasa , Kenya is the hottest in most of the months; whereas, Cario, Egypt fluctuates more significantly than the others.
In fact, standing at 80 in the first month, Mombasa increases slightly to over 80 before falling sharly by approximately 10 July. Then, a minimal growth of 5 is recorded in the next 5 months and reaches the peak at 80 in December.
Interestingly, the 2 cities Cario and South Africa follow the 2 opposite trends in all years. When it comes to Cape Town, it levels off at 70 in January-February. Meanwhile, Egypt rises gradually at the same time, followed by a dramatic increase to over 80 in July- the highest point in all time. In contrast, Egypt’s temperature hits the lowest figure of 55. Coming to the remaining 5 months, these 2 cities witnesses a steep decline to under 70 and 60, respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he most striking feature is that Mombasa , Kenya is the hottest in most of the mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83163265306 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9135375533 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1673684209 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0909090909 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117060845323 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431174481724 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417084339265 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698760688015 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342519056164 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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