In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?
People have differing views about the importance of being a homeowner that is valued over renting a house. There could be several reasons for this, and I suppose that this practice should be considered to be more of a positive trend.
There are some rational reasons for the age-old question of why it is better to buy a home than to rent a property. A cogent/ persuasive/ convincing explanation is the feeling of pride of homeowner; in other words, owning a home brings a sense of accomplishment and confidence that cannot be achieved through renting. In fact, when owing a house, he or she would prove that they are able to achieve any monumental goals and can give your family the security and commitment to move forward in life. Interestingly, once they have built up asset in their first home, which paves the way for / is leverage for buying a nicer home later. Another reason is that homeownership is a sound financial investment because although house values are not rising at double-digit rates or more, its value still is appreciating or at least remaining stable in most areas. Generally speaking, a home is an asset/real estate which increases in worth/in value over time at a rate above inflation.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe home ownership is a positive trend. Firstly, Being a Homeowner allows homebuyers creative control of their property, which can alter the property, including decor changes, landscaping and renovations, to suit their needs and style. Secondly, buying a house it becomes their legal property, which allows them greater freedom in its use without restrictions often enforced by a Landlord. However, Homeowners face many risks while owning the house like possible inability to pay taxes and mortgage, afford costly repairs, or neighborhood changes from good to bad.
In conclusion, although buying a home may sometimes seem challenging; the many benefits that come with owning your own home make it all worthwhile.
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... your own home make it all worthwhile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, at least, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10802469136 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8303611746 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1716730248 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210019503819 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760761859066 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073068776082 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133390303336 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787047803107 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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