The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies a over a period of 15 years

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The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies a over a period of 15 years

The line chart provides the data on how much rubbish was produced from three organizations from 2000 to 2015.
Overall, it is clear that the companies A and B experienced a decreasing trend in waste production while the amounts of waste produced by company C increased over the assessed period. At the beginning of the period, the waste materials of company A was the highest but the waste output of company C was the greatest by the end of the period.
Looking first at the commencing of the period, the waste output of company A was the highest volume, with its figure being 12 tonnes. This was followed by the waste production of companies B and C, with their respective quantities being 7 and 4 tonnes. From 2000 to 2005, companies B and C witnessed a significant increase to 11 and 6 tonnes of waste in turn while it was 2 tonnes which the amount of waste produced company A decreased over 5 years.
Turning to the finishing of the period, the company C experienced a dramatic growth to 11 tonnes which overtook the figure for company A and B while the waste materials produced by company A and B ended the period at 8 and 3 tonnes respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75667023542 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44976076555 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8648764944 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343106144741 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188475836604 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902208574684 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223829962418 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101645500767 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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