The bar graph below shows amount of carbon emissions in different countries during different years

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The bar graph below shows amount of carbon emissions in different countries during different years

The chart displays how much carbon was produced by six different countries over the period of 30 years, starting from 1975.
Overall, it is clear that the carbon emissions output witness an increasing trend in four countries except Germany and the UK, which were the countries that managed to lessen the carbon emissions output over the period shown.
Looking first at the carbon output in the USA, there was a steady increase from 1,200,000 in 1975 to 1,550,000 in 2005, which was the largest amount of carbon all three years. This was followed by China, which experienced a significant growth from 250,000 in 1975 to just 650,000 before more than doubling again to roughly 1,600,000 in 2005.
By contrast, less carbon was made by remain countries. The missions output from Germany witnessed a slight fall to 200,000 in 2005, after maintaining at 250,000 from 1975 to 2000. Likewise, the quantity of carbon in the UK decreased insignificantly from 190,000 to 180,000 at the period. Canada by far produced the least carbon compared with other nations, with its figure increasing from 50,000 in 1975 to match the UK in 2005. India increased uniformly from 50,000 to 250,000 at the same time.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, look

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.995 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49727851871 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3895932819 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114265671578 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577582717931 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602595311868 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999487357415 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601963065812 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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