The line chart illustrates the figure for average carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere by each person in four different countries over a 40-years period. Units are measured in metric tonnes.
It is apparent that the UK had the highest amount of CO2-emitting, whereas the least emission of CO2 is in Portugal from 1967 to 2007. Overall, the proportions of CO2 output for Italy and Portugal show steady growth. Meanwhile, both Sweden and the UK indicate a decrease over the given period.
According to survey data, Portugal emitted over 1 metric tonne of CO2 in the first year, followed by an upswing to under 6 in 2007 (on a level with Sweden at this time). Likewise, the figure for CO2 emissions for Italy increased dramatically from over 4 in 1967 to under 8 (nearly double) in 1997, then leveled off for the remainder of the period.
On the other hand, the emissions of CO2 in Sweden began at under 9 in 1967, then reached a peak at over 10 metric tonnes in comparison to the figure for the UK which witnessed a marginal decrease in 1977, before hitting a free fall to under 6 in 2007. Notable, the amount of the UK emission CO2 is always the highest in all four nations though it shows a decline between 1967 to 2007.
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 73
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 78
- The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six month period in 2011 78
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...able, the amount of the UK emission CO2 always is the highest in all four nations though ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, so, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5520361991 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50168551522 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4722158424 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309131248976 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128580097201 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583826519082 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184501241013 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046174695129 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.