The line graph provides data about how much amount of carbondioxide was being emitted by each individual averagely of four euroean countries, the United kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between the years 1967 and 2007.
Generally speaking, United kingdom was the country where maximum amount of carbondioxide was emitted whereas the least amount of carbondioxide was emitted in portugal.
More specifically, the amount of carbondioxid emission in the UK per persion was about 11 metric tonnes in the year 1967. Sweden was the second country with the removal of approximately 10.5 metric tonnes in the same year. similarly, the removal of carbondioxide in Italy and Portugal was slightly more than 6 and 1 metric tonnes respectively. After nine years, Sweden peaked up and reached the UK`s trend and then decrease dramatically. The UK decrease steadily in that particular year. There was slight increase in Italy trend however , Portugal increased gradually. In the final year(2007), The emission of carbondioxide by each individual in the Uk was roughly 9 metric tonnes. In the same year, Sweden and Portugal coincide and the emission was approximately 5 metric tonnes. On the other hand, samll incresed on the Italy trend in the carbondioxide emission can be observed, which was nearly 8 metric tonnes.
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- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, similarly, then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32211538462 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95423453026 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514423076923 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2515226885 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133784312488 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609594507967 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507283585234 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109683427524 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668977887235 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.