The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017.
The given graph illustrates the average expenditure per day of global travelers to New Zealand on business, holiday and paying a visit to relatives during a period of 20 years.
It is evident that expenses for a trip to friends and family members’ places was by far the lowest. In contrast, the majority of visitors showed the most preferences toward commercial meetings in the first half of the period , while the predilection was diverted to vacations in the last year.
In 1997, daily spending on vacations was at about $190, followed by the lead of that on business with over $250, and far beating that on the remaining category by around $90. In the next 5 years, New Zealand’s international income of these 3 types increase exponentially before reaching their peaks at $330 for commerce, $270 for vacation and nearly $220 for friends and family gathering.
From around 2002 to 2010, the figures for 3 kinds witnessed a dramatic deceleration and after that fluctuated considerably. Over the last 7 years, whereas the money spent on family visits fell and rose within a narrow range, that of other two still experienced the same trend. In the last year 2017, holiday superseded business in terms of international revenue with approximately $250 and $210 respectively, while visitors’ expenditure on family trips was at the bottom with under $140.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, still, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03555555556 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02238302054 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8304816015 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.625 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182320803771 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652630053274 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048782999815 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984362935646 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399533977084 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.