The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

The graph shows the change in the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) over forty years- from 1960 to 1990 and it makes a difference between wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.

In the 1960´s, the countries with the higher growth were the wealthy countries, with a GDP growth of around 4.5%. Followed by the non-globalisers which the smallest growth. During the 1970´s, the three types of countries maintained a similar growth.

The 1980´s there was a steady growth in the globalisers, while the growth in the non-globalisers plunged. There was also a fall in the growth on the wealthy countries.

Finally, in the 90's, the wealthy countries remained unchanged, while the globalisers reached a peak, about 5% of growth.
Between the 1960's and 1990's, the globalisers countries grew steadily, while growth in the wealthy countries dropped considerably. The non-globalisers, on the other hand, fluctuated widely over this period of time.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 198, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...other hand, fluctuated widely over this period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52027027027 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24264493355 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7090663945 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266116763489 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121192331663 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651975811411 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155990615245 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024334088926 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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