Many reformers argue that the financial resources of government should be allocated to other impoverished countries, whereas others suppose that concentrating on tacking their internal issues is a paramount importance. I'm in agreement with the proposal of determining national priority of on domestic problems.
On the one hand, cross-border support is a symbol of humanity. Obviously, people are divided
into diffent races and ethnicity by nature, culture and language, humanity is the core connected
characteristics among individuals. Thus, funding other countries through the providing of financial or social assistance is a praiseworthy action. In addition, helping other nations to cope with financial crises may decline the proportion of illegal migration, which is affected the security of the surrounding regions.
However, I opine that focusing on addressing domestic issues such as homeless or unemployment should be the top priority of any countries. Firstly, government funding is considered as a crucial factor to reserve and maintain welfare schemes as well as social security. The increasing of economic
growth ratelis based on numerous elements including employment. If in a nation has the higher percentage of the unemployed, this nation’s finance will not rise significantly. Furthermore, job opportunities , as a result, generate more personal budgets which people use to afford to pay their subsistence allowance decreasing the homelessness rate.
In conclusion, although cross-border support is a gesture of humanity, I still believe that
government should put the aim of dealing with internal issues in a country to be the major
priority
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78542510121 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25346759301 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651821862348 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.759232443 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124536879107 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365590353612 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406735567552 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515614485202 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339666657431 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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