The charts provide details about the average monthly use of a health club in Miami by all permanent full-time members over last year.
The most noticeable fact is that both males and females were influenced by season, because in first half of the Year people visited the club more rarely than in summer months, while in Autumn the trend was the higher in both sexes. So, highest point of people visits was June with a very slow decrease next 3 months, followed by a rapid drop to the end of the year.
It is also interesting, that men were more adherent to visit the club than women during the year. Moreover, the difference between men and women in peak period is higher than in other months. For instance, if in cold months man visited the club from 20 to 50 times more, in warm weather conditions man used the appointment from 870 to 850 times, whereas women did it 100 less than men.
Turning to pie charts, male membership by age are generally similar to female membership, but had some slight differences. If 55% 21-45 years old men visited the club, Only 51% the same ages women were adherent. However, women who were older 65 years ago the club subscription in comparison with a quarter of men of the same age.
Just come up, it is clear that the most interested the group in gym and PE use over the year were men that women, because they were more adherent to visit the health club.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...e trend was the higher in both sexes. So, highest point of people visits was June with a ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47450980392 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25695047614 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4022521951 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240036684215 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108379499436 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126302660499 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172096843597 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153639059403 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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