the graph below shows the average number of uk commuters travelling each day by car, bus, or train between 1970 and 2030
The graph below illustrates how many wokers comunting to work every day by three diffenrent forms of transportation in UK over the course of 60 years starting in 1970.
looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the number of UK commuters using car or train experiences an upward trend with the exception of the bus users.
The number of workers travelling by train stood at 2 millions in 1970, increasing slightly to 3 millions in 2010. And this figure then is predicted to grow steadily to a peak of roughly 4.8 millions in 2030. This pattern is almost identical to that for the number of commuter using private cars. It climbs significantly from 5 million in 1970 to about 7 millions in 2010, being estimated to rising midly to 9 million in 2030.
By contrast, the pattern which reflecting the number of bus users is completely reversed. At the beginning, it stood at 4 millions in 1970, and then decreased marginally to about 3.3 millions in 2010 before being predicted to declining to under 3 millions in 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...course of 60 years starting in 1970. looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ar or train experiences an upward trend with the exception of the bus users. The number of workers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79180347923 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.468962488 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264119921776 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112723397175 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677077260173 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162166948989 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583495320964 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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