The given graph illustrates information about how many Vietnamese students studied in three countries namely France, Russia and America over a period of 5 years starting from 2000.
In general, it is clear that the number of Vietnamese pupils enrolling in American and French schools increased substantially, as opposed to a marginal upward trend in Russian schools.
In 2000, the number of Vietnamese students learning in France was the largest with over 3.5 million, compared with nearly 3 million and 1.5 million students studying in Russia and America respectively. Over the following five years, the number of Vietnamese students studying abroad in France and Russia decreased by 1 million, whereas that in America saw a rise of 2 million students.
From 2005 onwards, the figure for America rose dramatically to 5 million students in 2015. Similarly, the number of Vietnamese students in French schools remained unchanged at approximately 2.5 million until 2010, before increasing by over 2 million in 2015. Meanwhile, although decreasing to the lowest point of under 2 million students in 2010, the illustration for Russia then rose gradually to 2.5 million at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, then, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30526315789 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89088739264 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5078425179 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334656923189 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17253873749 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858957500924 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199423409074 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936117870744 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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