The Graph below shows the averaged results for one of the two school trials, illustrating the substantial difference in growth rate between egg chickens and meat chickens.

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The Graph below shows the averaged results for one of the two school trials, illustrating the substantial difference in growth rate between egg chickens and meat chickens.

Overall, the average weight for meat chicken and layer chicken rose as the age of the chickens increased, especially after a month; the weight of both chickens grew significantly. The average weight for the meat chicken is higher than that of layer chickens.
Both chicken types grew in its mean weight significantly as the age is matured, in particular after 34 days, where the average weight grew substantially for meat chickens. The meat chicken tripled its weight from over 500 grams in 20th days to over 1500 grams within fortnights, whereas the weight of layer chickens doubled from about 200 grams to around 480 grams within fortnights. By 45 days of chicken’s age, meat chicken recorded at about 2500 grams of weight, while the layer chicken grew to over 500 grams.
The average weight for meat chicken was higher than that of layer chicken. The weight of meat chicken was initially big which was recorded at about 150 grams in 8 days in comparison to just 5 grams for layer chickens. By 20st days, the mean weight of meat chicken rose to over 500 grams compared to about 100 grams for layer chickens. At the age of 45, meat chicken reached at the average weight of over 2000 grams, whereas layer chicken reached at over 500 grams.

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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in particular']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.315352697095 0.268076937826 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.0954356846473 0.116061578633 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0497925311203 0.0759168565197 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0290456431535 0.0366838410393 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00829875518672 0.0131127313244 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.211618257261 0.155750635184 136% => OK
Participles: 0.0248962655602 0.0379272487307 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43908130826 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0248962655602 0.0210936926555 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0871369294606 0.0948980150116 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00829875518672 0.00967000014798 86% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1250.0 1161.00487805 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.9 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76036866359 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3133640553 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221198156682 0.247514529752 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110599078341 0.171178102325 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0691244239631 0.112407865282 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43908130826 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.382488479263 0.546246751206 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 32.7324102536 49.3433353143 66% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1111111111 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6148412101 42.9750493124 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.888888889 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 46.2309267793 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 4.15625 2.94281807926 141% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30516243937 0.418131533498 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.294956592746 0.181151798455 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0694914638114 0.0850326197045 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.742098591803 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107363362243 0.157042692854 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217615317685 0.228904883108 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896765768848 0.108899403657 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.599390662186 0.367819155151 163% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103978478995 0.0812612215331 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290774690101 0.316326947829 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897242915744 0.0921553760075 97% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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