The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008.

The line graph compares the birth rate of women in the UK in six age groups between 1973 and 2008.

Overall, it is clear that the birth rates decreased among women under 20 and among women aged between 20 and 29. The birth rates also fell among women over 40.

In 1973, the highest number of births 140 per 1000 people in the population was recorded among women who were aged 25-29. This compared with figures of 125 and 60 for women aged 20-25 and women under 20, respectively.

Among women over 40, the birth rate was 20. There was a decline in the birth rate, despite occasional fluctuations, for all these age groups over the 35-year period. For example, the 2008 figures indicate a birth rate of 40 for the under 20 age group, and a steady fall to about 95 for the 20-25 year-olds.

In contrast, the birth rate for women aged 30-35 rose gradually from 75 in 1973 to 82 in 2008. There was also an increase in the birth rate among the 35-39 year-olds, rising from 40 in 1973 to reach a peak of 62 from 2000 to 2008

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, for example, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36787564767 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10422666864 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502590673575 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6392161723 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394837568215 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208794794174 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112474998461 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282976901772 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122531997988 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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