The diagram compares the birth rate of females in various age groups in UK from 1973 to 2008.
At first glance, it is noticeable that the rates of birth of women in the age of 30 to 39 witnessed an upward trend, while the rest of the groups experienced a downward over the period years.
In the first year, the figures for the group of 20-25 ranked second at over 120 birth per 1000 people, while the birth rate of females aged under 20 was nearly a half as high as that of the former. Afterwards, both groups dropped steadily throughout the time frame.
Females in the group of 25-29 was the highest of all age groups in 1973. This was followed by a fluctuation until 1998 before levelling off at 120 in 2008. In contrast, women who are over 40 years old contributed the least figures over the time scale.
The birth rate of females in the group of 30 to 35 and 35 to 39 ranked third and fifth respectively initially. While the former saw a gradual growth, the latter rose significantly to over 60 and outstripped the group under 20 in the last year of the survey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37779309445 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6380864864 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295472486957 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135960177379 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124720642715 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202499582073 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125705645439 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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