The graph below shows the consumption of fish in a city of Japan between 1980 and 2015

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the consumption of fish in a city of Japan between 1980 and 2015

The line graph compares three different types of fish that a Japanese used in a week during a period of 35 years, commencing from 1980. Units are measured in grams
In general, there was an upward tendency in mackerel and salmon consumption, while the opposite was true to tuna. In addition, tuna predominated for the most given period except the last 12 years in which mackerel and tuna respectively replaced as the most favorite fish kind.
Although starting at different points in 1980, at 230 and 170, tuna and mackerel shared the same pattern in the next 10 years. The former and the latter reached a peak at 270 and 170 in 1985, after which both experienced a dramatic decrease by 30 between 1985 and 1990. Thereafter, there was an inverse proportion, the former continuously decline to 100 in the final year, with the most dramatic drop over the last 5 years while the latter soared considerably to approximately 200 at the end of the period.
Beginning at 70 in 1980, which was by far lower than the other two kinds, the amount of salmon eaten rose over threefold to nearly 250 in 2015 after stabilized during the initial 25 years

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6815920398 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57003580375 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7045701071 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.428571429 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093316926289 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04391793299 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419258310125 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620585619846 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371899602289 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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