The line graph illustrates the use of three different types of spreads from year 1981 to 2007.
Overall, the consumption of margarine and butter shrunk with advancing years, whereas the usage of low fat and reduced spreads showed variable pattern. The unit used is grams.
In 1981, just above 140 grams of butter was being consumed but it rose sharply to approximately 160 grams in 1986; when butter became the most popular spread. Conversely, only 90 grams margarine was used in 1981 and it had further reduced to 80 grams by 1986. After this year, butter usage showed steady fall ever year, reaching up to only 50 grams in 2007. However, margarine started experiencing a drop in 1996 and by the end of time, only 40 grams of it was being eaten.
In sharp contrast to this, low fat and reduced spreads came in food industry in 1996 and started from 10 grams of consumption. However, this rapidly increased every year and by 2001, the use of low fat products had become 80 grams. In next years, the trend changed and a slight fall was observed, reducing it up to 70 grams only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60103626943 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37790531268 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2739280489 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117593931564 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542388737794 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728842303355 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106373355517 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862064800452 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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