The bar chart provides information about the contribution of agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services to the economy of British from 1900 to 2000.
Overall, in the beginning of the century, traditional sectors like agriculture and manufacturing dominated the UK’s economy, while the contribution of business and financial services was grown up when the economy moved to the modern era.
At the start of century, the contribution of business and financial services was in the lowest point. But through 100 year, it increased significantly from under 10% in 1900 to over 30% in 2000.
In contrast, the agriculture sector had contributed in the Britain’s economy nearly 50% in 1900. Regardless of the slight rose in 1950, it plunged wildly and reached to below 10% in 2000. Likewise, the contribution of manufacturing declined gradually from about 45% to approximately 15% at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43150684932 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27354986667 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7422970704 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298254266576 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13299420074 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099859370759 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19136278898 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670618634646 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.