The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The line graph compares the requirements of electricity units in England for an average day in winter and summer whereas, the proportion of electricity that is utilized in English homes is elucidated by the pie-chart.
Overall, the electricity demand is significantly higher in winter than in summer with the maximum usage is observed at 21:00 in both seasons. Interestingly, the lion's share of electricity is being used for heating purposes.
To commence with, energy consumption in winter is almost double throughout the day as compared to summer. In the former season, the demand initiates from 35000 units while the latter half of it (around 17000). With a few fluctuations observed in winter, a noticeable drop can be seen at 6 in the morning which drops to 30000 units and the peak is at night at around 9 o'clock. Summer's fluctuations are much negligible with two highest points at 3:00 PM and 9:00 PM but the demand does not exceed more than 20000 units.
Secondly, amongst the four categories, a mammoth share of electricity is utilized for heating rooms and water accounting for over half of the total ( 52.5). Two other areas: lighting, TV, Radio and Vacuum cleaner, food mixer, electricity tools consumed the least energy and both of them are having an equal proportion of 15% each. Lastly, the energy needed for ovens, kettle and washing machine is 2.5% higher than the above figures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71749512422 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9872304069 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293729656021 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122332556628 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133432173899 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215923310998 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156328539868 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.