The diagram below shows the process of distilling salty water into fresh water
The diagrammatic representation depicts how fresh water can be obtained from salty water by the process of distillation.
First of all, a gas stove is required which acts as a heat source. On top of it, a pot is kept and it is covered by a funnel. The other side of the funnel is connected to a long pipe which is kept above a bucket. To keep the pipe on its place, it is tied with the help of a rope.
The process begins once the gas stove has been turned on. The salty water in the pot begins to boil, and the steam rises into the pipe through the funnel. A cloth is wrapped around the pipe and cold water is poured on it which condenses the vapour inside. Water droplets are formed and they drip into the bucket and hence, fresh water is obtained.
Overall, converting sea water into fresh water requires 8 materials and this procedure is quite easy to perform.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32926829268 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33901676033 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3813002411 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356264346268 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131251147352 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136120002315 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239547507704 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140426843306 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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