The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make co

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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.
The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by Tran Thu on Mon, 07/10/2017 - 12:41

The graph provided compares the amount of electricity consumed throughout a day in winter to that in summer, while the pie chart reveals information on the percentage of the different electric use in each England home.
Overall, it is clearly shown that England demand for electricity is much higher in winter than that in summer and it is mostly used for heating.
As can be seen from the line graph that the amount of electricity used in a winter day fluctuates dramatically, ranging from over 30,000 to nearly 50,000 units. A summer day, however, see a lower and slighter fluctuation, being around 20,000 units.
It is interesting to note that both in winter and summer, the demand for electricity bottoms up before 9.00 AM, namely just over 30,000 and approximately 15,000 units respectively. Then the latter is followed by a hitting peak of 20,000 units at 2.00 PM, in contrast to a steady rise in the former. Only until 10.00 PM do the electricity consumption in winter reach its highest point, at nearly 50,000, and the similar happens in a summer day with lower figure, stood at 20,000.
From the data in the pie chart, the majority of electricity is used for heating rooms and water, accounted for more than a half of the total share. The second popular use of electricity (17,5%) is for ovens, kettles and washing machines. The proportions of electricity consumed by lighting, TV and radio, as well as that by vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools are equally the same, being 15% each.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, then, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, as well as that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83011583012 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67459181221 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.95997998 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.1 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28622232976 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127952427197 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873133865749 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191061663727 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822833499724 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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