The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar chart shows the unemployment rates among women in the countries that make up the United Kingdom, both in 2013 and in 2014. There has generally been a small decrease in female unemployment rates from 2013 to 2014, except in Scotland.

In 2013, 5.6% of women in Northern Ireland were unemployed. The only country with a smaller percentage of women unemployed was Wales, with a rate of 5.4%. Both countries saw a decrease in the percentage of unemployed women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage fell to 4.6% and in Wales it fell to 5%.

England had the greatest percentage of unemployed women in 2013, with 6.8%. However, this decreased by 0.3% in 2014. Lastly, Scotland was the only country which had an increasing percentage of unemployed women. In 2013, it had 6.1% of women out of work. This increased to 6.7% in 2014, making it the country with the highest female unemployment rate of the four countries.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'lastly']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259259259259 0.268076937826 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.100529100529 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0582010582011 0.0759168565197 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.015873015873 0.0366838410393 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.015873015873 0.0131127313244 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.174603174603 0.155750635184 112% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.0379272487307 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69077562006 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021164021164 0.0210936926555 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00529100529101 0.00175180941692 302% => OK
Determiners: 0.10582010582 0.0948980150116 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010582010582 0.00967000014798 109% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 928.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.9 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28125 0.337110787985 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2375 0.247514529752 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.171178102325 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13125 0.112407865282 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69077562006 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.546246751206 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.6435156729 49.3433353143 80% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5454545455 23.0094962315 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9592383348 42.9750493124 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 135.714022679 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 23.0094962315 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 0.689975730869 26% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 38.2954545455 47.7609492067 80% => OK
Elegance: 3.52 2.94281807926 120% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559276532615 0.418131533498 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146881602584 0.181151798455 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715166844033 0.0850326197045 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605568601286 0.706616315825 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130065964584 0.157042692854 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264533159503 0.228904883108 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125301646257 0.108899403657 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.505455138981 0.367819155151 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114910094686 0.0812612215331 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.449505299564 0.316326947829 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108851112574 0.0921553760075 118% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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