The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar graph represents the proportion of female unemployment in the countries that make up the United Kingdom from 2013 to 2014. There has been a small decrease in female unemployment rates from 2013 to 2014, except in Scotland.
England had the highest female unemployment rates of 6.8% in 2013 and 6.5% in 2014, whereas Scotland was the only country experiencing an increasing percentage of unemployed women; 6.3% in 2013 and 6.7% by 2014. This figure was making the country with the highest female unemployment rate of the four countries.
In contrast, the rest of countries showed a declining trend. Wales had the lowest female unemployed rates of 5.4% in 2013 and 5.0% in 2014, while Northern Ireland recorded at 5.6% of female unemployment rates in 2013, which declined by 0.4% to reach at 5.2% in 2014.

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Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['whereas', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272151898734 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.101265822785 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822784810127 0.0759168565197 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0 0.0366838410393 0% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.170886075949 0.155750635184 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0316455696203 0.0379272487307 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72719329146 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0189873417722 0.0210936926555 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00632911392405 0.00175180941692 361% => OK
Determiners: 0.0949367088608 0.0948980150116 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126582278481 0.00967000014798 131% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 813.0 1161.00487805 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.9 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93430656934 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328467153285 0.337110787985 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226277372263 0.247514529752 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167883211679 0.171178102325 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131386861314 0.112407865282 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72719329146 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 44.4264680959 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8333333333 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3542860442 42.9750493124 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 45.4610705596 47.7609492067 95% => OK
Elegance: 4.6875 2.94281807926 159% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.684231331639 0.418131533498 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.22231924216 0.181151798455 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.058693941414 0.0850326197045 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.733343869543 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146723476715 0.157042692854 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.392536152977 0.228904883108 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12392329149 0.108899403657 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.495162362937 0.367819155151 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0196213454679 0.0812612215331 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.533473188157 0.316326947829 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241551252788 0.0921553760075 26% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.14146341463 438% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 0.956097560976 523% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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