The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

The bar graph shows the unemployment rates among women in each county of United Kingdom both in 2013 and 2014.

All the countries in UK has experienced the drop in economy level due to the female unemployment in the year 2013. It is clearly visible that the employment rate has increased in all the three countries except for Scotland when compared with the consecutive year.

In the year 2013 England had the record of worse unemployment rate of 6.8% followed by Scotland with 6.1%. Northern Ireland and wales were quite nearer with unemployment rate of 5.6% and 5.4% , respectively.

In the following year, Employment rate had increased by 0.3% in England and 0.4% in Wales. Northern Ireland had the record of greatest improvement in employment rate by 1.0% . However, the female unemployment rate further increased in Scotland by 0.5% in the 2014 and this was recorded to be highest unemployment of all in both the years with 6.7% .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
... with unemployment rate of 5.6% and 5.4% , respectively. In the following year...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
... Wales. Northern Ireland had the record of greatest improvement in employment rate by 1.0% ...
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Suggestion: .
...t improvement in employment rate by 1.0% . However, the female unemployment rate f...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the highest'.
Suggestion: be the highest
...5% in the 2014 and this was recorded to be highest unemployment of all in both the years w...
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Suggestion: .
...yment of all in both the years with 6.7% .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96202531646 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78665411347 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2131950513 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205963989861 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106146168 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844544429917 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15844756507 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877260554611 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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