Man is a social animal who wears mask which cannot be denied. When asked about whether being truthful in any relation, majority of the overwhelming people support the fact that being truthful is an important consideration in any relationship between people. On the other hand, a few hold the converse idea. I support the latter one and here are following reasons for that.
To begin with, I agree with the fact being truthful in any relation is important in order to build the trust between each other. However, telling a small lie is as important as being truthful in saving a relationship because sometimes truth is ruthless. Here is an example for that. When a close friend of mine met with an accident during my exams, I wasn't told about it as I might get disturbed. At that time, the decision took by my parents to conceal it from me was indeed the right decision because of which I was able to perform well in my exam.
Moreover, telling truth regardless of the situation would be inappropriate. Sometimes small white lies can be win-wins especially when it comes to being in a relation. For example, when you go out for shopping with your girl-friend and she ask you about her choice of selection, either if it is a dress or sandals, or even a nail color, which is not your area of expertise, telling a white lie would make her happy and bonding gets stronger and harmony is achieved.
Admittedly, there are justifications by people who argue that being truthful can be the best possible solution, but not in all circumstances. Things are more complex and complicated whereas it is more possible that truth has never existed. Probably, truth is subjective and depends on one's perspective of seeing a situation as true or false.
Finally, from the aforementioned examples, I believe that it depends more on circumstances, and accordingly telling a small lie would always be beneficial in saving a relation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'few holds'.
Suggestion: few holds
...ip between people. On the other hand, a few hold the converse idea. I support the latter...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...met with an accident during my exams, I wasnt told about it as I might get disturbed....
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
... shopping with your girl-friend and she ask you about her choice of selection, eith...
^^^
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a nail color, which is not your area of expertise, telling a white lie would mak...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81570996979 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83860291436 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543806646526 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2124160502 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196763970013 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639387006478 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067102366035 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104509237512 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588774820442 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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