The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart makes a comparison of female unemployment rate in the four countries of the UK between 2013 and 2014.

In 2013, England had the highest female unemployment rate, with 6.8% of women waiting for a job offer, followed by Scotland at 6.7%. Wales had the lowest female unemployment rate, which is only 5.4%. The proportion of unemployed women in Northern Ireland was slightly higher than that of Wales which is 5.6%.

However, the situation changed dramatically in 2014. With approximately 10% increase of female unemployment, Scotland was the country having the highest unemployment ra...

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