The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

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The below graph shows the number of book...
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...by Public Library from 2011 to 2014. As seen in the graph there were differen...
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...were different trends for men and women.The number of books read by men increasingl...
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...ly from 2011 to 2012 from 3000 to 4000.Then after,the number raises to 14000 in 201...
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...011 to 2012 from 3000 to 4000.Then after,the number raises to 14000 in 2014.This was...
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...fter,the number raises to 14000 in 2014.This was the highest range for this period. ...
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...was the highest range for this period. Women are started to read books more tha...
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...men from 2011 to 2012 from 5000 to 8000.And then gradually increases to the 10000 b...
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...eases the count to 7000 in the 2014. Overall,there was a high trend in the nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 509.0 965.302439024 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50442477876 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24412634718 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 106.607317073 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 127.8 283.868780488 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2886679607 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.639842855829 0.215688989381 297% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.450203947456 0.103423049105 435% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.31934220493 0.0843802449381 378% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389818216594 0.15604864568 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.309476637157 0.0819641961636 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.36 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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