The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the figure for question received by the Tourist Information Office in a country over a period of six months in 2011.
In general, the was a considerable increase in the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office from person and telephone, while an opposite trend could be seen in the figure for letter/ email. In particular, the number of inquiries received in person was a considerable rise during the period shown.
In January, the inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in form of person and letter/email stood at 850 and above 800 in 2011, while this figure for the telephone was lower, at about 410. Over the next three months, the number of person who asked the information of the Tourist Information Office in this nation was common, from 410 to 800. Meanwhile, the figure for inquiries received by letter/email saw a significant fall, after that recovering to 1000. On the other hand, this tourist information office received enquiries via telephone underwent a moderate fall of about 50.
From March onwards, the number of inquiries received by the tourist information office from person reach a peak of 1100. Similarly, that of letter/email underwent a similar trend, with the number increasing to 1600; however, this country saw a considerable fall of 310 during the period shown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, while, in general, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83159975038 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441441441441 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9598541586 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259482001489 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138930843469 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870436658185 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20254095259 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820426480546 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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