The graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not any do physical activity in Australia. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not any do physical activity in Australia. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .
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Submitted by Patel Romaa on Fri, 07/16/2021 - 05:34
The bar graph elucidates how many adults do not active to do any physical activity in Australia.
Overall,it can be manifested that the highest number of youth generation more interesting this any physical activity, However, the senior citizens they do not participate any physical activity.
firstly,in under the age, group15-24 males and females are most active in physical activity which is 15 to 17 percent and it increases slightly which is 18 to 21 percent. Moreover, it similar percent it can be observed under the 35to 44 age group.
secondly, the lowest proportion of males age groups are 45 to 54 and 55to 64 they are not interested to do any physical activity. However, females are interested which is 25 and 35 percent. furthermore, and over the 75 year age group do not interest to do any physical activity for the both gender
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0618556701 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80732812688 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4633293211 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518316404399 0.215688989381 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224459356734 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211117971902 0.0843802449381 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254619006643 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.326820902262 0.0819641961636 399% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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