prevention is better than cure. out of a country's health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Irrefutably, in this modern globalization era, a plethora of people know about health education and they prefer the medical field instead of preventive measures in many countries developed medical colleges and give better health education regarding the major disorder and body system. In my opinion, I think that, the government should do work on preventive measures and major health conditions for human beings.
To begin with , there are a lot of reasons why the government should do improving health education for the students and why this so important part of our life.first and foremost if the people know about a health issue hence they can easily solve the problem and aware about the disease condition so authority should be spent money in health education. The second reason, nowadays immensely people do not knowledge about new medical technology like MRI, CT scan, and also health education thus the government has the responsibility to do invest more money in health education and so students are involved and teach the other illiterate people.
Moreover, I certainly believe that preventive measures are a very integral part of our life instead of health education. There are predominant reasons, firstly in this trend era everyone has preferred fast food and they are not doing yoga,meditation,exercise after that they are suffering from many diseases condition such as cholesterol, diabetes, blood pressure hence the government should organize camping related health problems and teach to the people how to prevent and safety measures related to health. secondly, the government should spend money on health insurance, medical clamp so poor people easily treat their disease conditions and other health issue.
In recapitulation, I strongly believe that prevention is better than cure and safety measures are also an important role in our life and also health education is important for the everyone.
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: Secondly
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: the; everyone
... also health education is important for the everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92014120945 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 283.868780488 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4197586478 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.125 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327513032983 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164366575568 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288502081976 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217692802093 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031301851846 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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