The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The graph provides with information on the distribution of the percentage of people going to cinemas among all days of the week. The data are available for 2003, 2005, and 2007.
As an overall trend in may be seen that people tend to go to the cinema on weekends reaching the highest about 44 percent mark on Friday in 2005. However, it was established that the smallest figures are on Mondays and Wednesdays among all periods of study.
On Tuesdays all numbers are in the range from about 16 percent to 20 percent while on Thursdays after 2003 the percentage fell dramatically from about 23 percent to less than 15 percent in 2003. Nevertheless, in the following 2 years, this number moderately increased to nearly 19 percent.
Interestingly, on Fridays in the years 2003, 2005, and 2007 the share of people maintained exactly the same level of 30 percent. as for Saturdays and Sundays, they fluctuated similarly with the smallest percentage in 2003, then in 2005, and the highest in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... available for 2003, 2005, and 2007. As an overall trend in may be seen that pe...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...d exactly the same level of 30 percent. as for Saturdays and Sundays, they fluctua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, nevertheless, similarly, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83040935673 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72046129941 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1535439009 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119543715148 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582078735748 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812713471516 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899073836594 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689723062563 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.