The graph below shows the percentage of self employed workers of the total workforce in five countries in 1998 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of workers who work for themselves, out of all employees in five countries, in 1998 and 2000.
It is true that the number of people having an interest in entrepreneurship in Greece and Turkey was much higher than in Russia, Slovakia and Czech Republic. Furthermore, the percentage of self-employed workers in Turkey was highest in both years.
The proportions of entrepreneurship in Russia in 1998 and 2000 were the lowest, which were compared with the remaining four countries. It was 5% in 1998 and rose by around 2% in two years. The number of people owning their business in Czech Republic saw a similar growth to 15% in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure of Slovakia experienced a double increase from 6% in 1998 to 12% in 2000.
While workers of Russia, Czech Republic and Slovakia increasingly preferred self-employment, these in Greece and Turkey tended to decrease over the period shown. In 1998, the data of entrepreneurship in Greece was 42%; however, it dropped by around 7% to 35% in 2000. It was the similar decline from 56% to 39% in Turkey, which is the country having the largest percentage of self-employed people in two years shown.
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- Children do not respect their parents and teachers as much as they did in the past This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society Discuss 89
- The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries However educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- In many countries today people buy a range of household goods TV microwave oven and rice cookers Is it a positive or negative development 67
- The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn
- Task 2 In the modern world it is possible to shop work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face to face contact with others Is this a positive or negative development 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95024875622 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07096176599 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1909626254 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121237730067 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544564327238 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469283933158 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804201124484 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023157884657 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.