The graph below shows a percentage who drank each unit group on heaviest drinking day by age group, 2014 in the UK. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.
The graph represents the proportion of British people in four age groups (16 to 24, 25 to 44, 45 to 64, 65 and over) by drinking four distinctive units from +14 units, 7-14 units, 4.67 – 7 units and below 4.67 units in 2014.
Overall, younger age groups tended to drink similar proportions of drink whereas the elders preferred to drink up to 4.67 units. It is interesting to note that, the highest proportion of British age groups had drunken up to 4.67 units.
In terms of younger generations, the majority of them drank below 4.67 units of drinking of 45%, followed by 25% of them drank between 7-14 units and there was a similar proportion for drinking over 14 units and 4.67 – 7 units (of 15%). Meanwhile, British people with 25 – 44 age group showed the similar trend as the younger generation; the highest proportion for below 4.67 units of drinking (nearly 50%), 25% of them drank 7 – 14 units and 5% for the rest of drinking units.
For the elder generations especially over 65 years, a three quarter of them drank maximum of 4.67 units per day and the equivalent proportion was divided into the rest of drinking units except for over 14 units which had 5% of drinking person.
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'whereas', 'while', 'except for']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244813278008 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.103734439834 0.116061578633 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0829875518672 0.0759168565197 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0207468879668 0.0366838410393 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0207468879668 0.0131127313244 158% => OK
Prepositions: 0.170124481328 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0373443983402 0.0379272487307 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45112307456 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331950207469 0.0210936926555 157% => OK
Particles: 0.00414937759336 0.00175180941692 237% => OK
Determiners: 0.0580912863071 0.0948980150116 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00414937759336 0.00967000014798 43% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1191.0 1161.00487805 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.9 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53953488372 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279069767442 0.337110787985 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204651162791 0.247514529752 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120930232558 0.171178102325 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0744186046512 0.112407865282 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45112307456 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441860465116 0.546246751206 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.9367768008 49.3433353143 77% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 35.8333333333 23.0094962315 156% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0457905741 42.9750493124 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.5 135.714022679 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8333333333 23.0094962315 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 56.2984496124 47.7609492067 118% => OK
Elegance: 3.11428571429 2.94281807926 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229681588155 0.418131533498 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.329636880384 0.181151798455 182% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.130900995705 0.0850326197045 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.898952143715 0.706616315825 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0858953703501 0.157042692854 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154496900589 0.228904883108 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677121755795 0.108899403657 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426915760357 0.367819155151 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.163454373483 0.0812612215331 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169861279964 0.316326947829 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505855060269 0.0921553760075 55% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.