The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different countries in the US state of oregon.
The given line graph represents the change in population in thousands in Columbia, Ymahill and washington in the state of Oregon by country from 1940 to 2000.
Overall, there was an increase in the population in three different nations but the rapid increase was observed in washington.
It is clear from the graph that in 1940, there was 75000 people found in washington which rose moderately to just over 12000 in 1970. After that, the rate of population climbed dramatically to well over 240 in 2000.
In contrast, approximately same number of people lived in Yamhill and Columbia (30000) in 1940. In 1970, a slight difference in the number of people can be seen in the graph. At this time, 45000 people were living in Yamhill and around 32000 of them lived in Columbia. Then there was significant increase in the population of both countries from 1970 to 2000 that differs by 15000 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87662337662 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68417556212 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6962075958 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280167864228 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120328013801 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105017932347 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181578445539 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108075453593 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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