The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by sho2501 on Thu, 03/29/2018 - 02:25

The chart illustrates the pattern of population growth from two different countries started from 2000 and shown in a form of predictions up until 2050. Overall, both countries are experienced a slight growth until China predicted to reach its peak around 2025 to 2030.

In the beginning of the years, China had approximately 1.250 billions of population in total and slightly increased to about 1350 billions by 2010 and predicted to grow even more by 2025 around 1420 in total. But estimated to decrease approximately to 1400 billions by 2050.

On the other hand, India had approximately 1000 billions of population in total, and it did not stand long enugh whereupon it increased roughly to about 1200 by 2010 and predicted to pass through China’s population around 2030, and continue to rise approximately to 1600 billions by 2050.

The chart conclude that India’s population in total is 20% larger than China’s population in total by 2050.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '250 billion'.
Suggestion: 250 billion
...of the years, China had approximately 1.250 billions of population in total and slightly increa...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1000 billion'.
Suggestion: 1000 billion
...the other hand, India had approximately 1000 billions of population in total, and it did not sta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'concludes'.
Suggestion: concludes
... to 1600 billions by 2050. The chart conclude that India's population in total i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21794871795 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98225080356 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0127616624 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229138730564 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123157729542 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548438451411 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15102159231 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479314450702 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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