The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 Summarize the inforation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 wor

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarize the inforation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The line graph demonstrates how many people have been in India and China since 2000, with projection to the year 2050.

It can be concluded from the graph is that there was an enormous growth in the number of both Indian and Chinese over the period shown. Meanwhile, India is predicted to reach the highest population in 2050.

At the beginning of the stage, the figure for India’s people hit a low of a billion, which got 250 million less than the number of the Chinese in the 2000s. Until the present of 2020, the population in India rises sharply, by around 310 million people. However, in this year, China is still higher than India in terms of its population.

The changes can be appeared between 2020 and 2050 when the population of this 2 nation goes on thinking in 10 years started until meeting the same rate in 2030. During the next 20 years, China's population will climb dramatically and surpass that of India. By contrast, there will be a downward trend in the figure for China from 2020 to the end of the given stage.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58288770053 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33175929991 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.18502613 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27731571811 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113664881865 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474085177514 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16231468392 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127003707478 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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