the graph below shows the populations in India and China since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth until 2050.
The line graph gives information about the population rise in India and China from the year 2000. Predictions for population growth until the year 2050 are also given. Overall, there is a steady rise in the Indian population during the period. Whereas, The Chinese population also increases steadily for some time but it is projected to decline in the future. In 2000, India had a population of 1 billion whereas the Chinese population was between 1.2 and 1.3 billion. The population of India rose dramatically over the next 10 years and almost hit 1.2 billion by 2010. During the same period, the Chinese population also grew by 100 million. By 2030, it is estimated that the population of both countries will be equal. The Indian population is expected to grow afterward while the Chinese population is projected to decline.
The total population of India is expected to reach 1.6 billion by 2050. Furthermore, The Chinese population is expected to hit its peak value of 1.45 billion by 2025 and then after it would reportedly decline and reach 1.4 billion in 2050.
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 73
- The Government s investment in arts music and theatre is a waste of money The Government should invest these funds in public services instead To what extent do you agree with the statements 84
- the graph below shows the populations in India and China since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth until 2050 84
- Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The Bar Chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90607734807 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66448457265 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5944658483 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39411288683 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177622973978 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10070183371 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285289351033 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120699254069 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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