The Vertical column linear representation illustrates the information regarding the percentage of the population in three different nations over the period of 100 years (1940 to 2040).The data is calibrated in percentage.
In an Overview, It is crystal clear that the Japan demonstrates minor fluctuations on other hand the united states and sweden both reveals same fluctuations
It is ostensible that the USA figures out the highest proportion of population accounted with 9% in the year of 1940. Whereas 15% population of aged 65 and over mentioned in the year of 1980 in the united states. Whilst, Japan have undoubtedly least population with 5% in year of 1940 and it have highest population about 27% in year of 2040.
Turning to the remaining data, The Sweden have gradually incline in the population of old people form the year 1960 to 2040. However, it is observed that slightly high proportion of aged people with approximately 7% in the equivalent year of the japan.
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 73
- Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...population of aged 65 and over mentioned in the year of 1980 in the united states...
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...n the united states. Whilst, Japan have undoubtedly least population with 5% in year of 1940 and ...
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...pulation with 5% in year of 1940 and it have highest population about 27% in year of...
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...pulation with 5% in year of 1940 and it have highest population about 27% in year of 2040. ...
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...aining data, The Sweden have gradually incline in the population of old people form t...
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... incline in the population of old people form the year 1960 to 2040. However, it ...
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...ion of aged people with approximately 7% in the equivalent year of the japan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08024691358 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96792922277 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9053118988 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172731918137 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945610390348 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437531419291 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993019288606 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067103822442 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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