The graph illustrates the number of people who aged 65 and over in Japan, Sweden and USA from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, USA has the highest population at the beginning of period although it has the lowest at the end and by contrast, in the first year of period japan was the lowest one and it finish the period with the biggest number. Sweden has some fluctutations but not change the sorting.
In the first half of the period, USA showed stable increase until 1980. It was almost 10% and rose to the 15%, but after that it started to fall. Sweden followed the same way with USA, it accounted for more than 5% in 1940 and increased by nearly 10%. Contrarily, Japan was not represents a growth between 1940 and almost 1990. It made up about 5% and drop to the less than 5%.
In second half of the period, Japan’s increasing was slightly at first and then sharply. It was less than 5% in 2000 and reached up to more than 25% in 2040. USA has also showed a growth in 50 years. It was under the 15% in 2000 and in 2040 it just reached to almost 25%. Sweden has significant increase and decrease after 2000, it accounted for just over the 25%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finishes'?
Suggestion: finishes
... period japan was the lowest one and it finish the period with the biggest number. Swe...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32407407407 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21890184038 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490740740741 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0236622765 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8461538462 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967976925723 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384187762528 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509651891189 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807348862075 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701154551812 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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